The art is very good.
The voices are loud(in relation to the rest of the sound) and hard to understand(low quality mikes maybe).
As of now 2.5/5 stars(exactly average).
If you keep working at it you may become one of the greats.
Actually, you might've put the volume too high while your watching my animation. Don't worry that happened to me once when I was judging a submission & then put a downvote until I saw my volume was too high & accidentally fracture the submission's rating. It's okay you don't have to apologize, accident/mistakes happens. But hey, I appreciate your comment & your opinion, also thank you for judging my art as good & wishing me luck too. :)
It could be a little clearer what the vieharr is doing; I probably wouldn't have understood that without the description in the author comments.
Other than that it's a pretty awesome start to what I hope is a long and fruitful career as an animator.
Yeah, I do realize it can be a bit confusing. That's the one thing that bothered me the most about this film. (that and I feel it was a bit sappy.) But, hey, The best way to learn is to just go for it. lol.
I appreciate the review. Thank you!
This is pretty awesome, just please invest in better mike or put subtitles, I had a hard time understanding what was being said.
This was nice.
Just remember to include a seizure warning on account of that strobe at the end.
Thank you for your appreciation and I've already included a disclaimer.
You managed to capture the feeling perfectly here.
Takes me back...
The animation is also pretty good and the punchline made me laugh.
This was nice.
What is the music called?
This was very cute. A nice introduction to wilhemina and friends.
Also I really loved your marin cartoon back in the day, glad to see you're still doing stuff.
This is ok for the intended purpose.
The individual character's animations are pretty well done.
I feel that sometimes they're not connecting...
Like they're not actually touching each other with some of the punches and kicks.
Keep up the good work.
Maybe I should make the fists and feet "go through" the target. The frame in which the attacks connect with their targets passes too quickly and it might give the impression that there is no connection. Thank you for the insight. I appreciate it.
I really liked this.
Stella has a lot of character and the design of the scions is amazing.
I want to see more for sure.
Will you be posting the final version here on NG?
Yea, I'll be posting it here and everywhere I can. Gotta spread it around like fire!
This was very nice.
The art honestly reminds me of early onepunch webmanga so you just need some practice.
I can totally see this as an extended opening for a show.
Keep up the good work and stay awesome.
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