lwyzlwyz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TD-Solitary Definement]

I so rarely give a 5 star rating... It needs to be something truly special.
Your videos are a source of joy, even when the subject matter is heavy or deep.
Keep up the great work and stay awesome.

[The Dangers of Love]

This is how you do an ad.

[What Albino Skwurl Sees]

This is a nice start. Good art and the animation is mostly solid.
There are some pacing problems with a few scenes lasting too long.
The music is too loud, so that when it´s at a confortable volume I can´t hear the voice work.
Keep up the good work and stay awesome.

GreyBertMonkey responds:

Thanks man, I've got a much better computer and drawing capabilities (I used a mouse to draw this whole cartoon) and my voice acting and music has grown, I hope

[Quoll alone: Where is Skittles]

This is pretty nice.
You should try to balance your sound a bit more. The music kept being louder than the voice acting.
Also, I don't think that fair use extends to using music for dramatic effect or to enhance a scene's atmosphere.

Yokomation responds:

Thanks for the help :3

[Awesome Nesscar - Cyber Invasion (Part 2)]

The art is very good.
The voices are loud(in relation to the rest of the sound) and hard to understand(low quality mikes maybe).
As of now 2.5/5 stars(exactly average).
If you keep working at it you may become one of the greats.

oscaralexismartinez responds:

Actually, you might've put the volume too high while your watching my animation. Don't worry that happened to me once when I was judging a submission & then put a downvote until I saw my volume was too high & accidentally fracture the submission's rating. It's okay you don't have to apologize, accident/mistakes happens. But hey, I appreciate your comment & your opinion, also thank you for judging my art as good & wishing me luck too. :)

[Talk to Me]

It could be a little clearer what the vieharr is doing; I probably wouldn't have understood that without the description in the author comments.
Other than that it's a pretty awesome start to what I hope is a long and fruitful career as an animator.

LaleyWasHere responds:

Yeah, I do realize it can be a bit confusing. That's the one thing that bothered me the most about this film. (that and I feel it was a bit sappy.) But, hey, The best way to learn is to just go for it. lol.

I appreciate the review. Thank you!

[(Original animated series) Orbisea trailer]

This is pretty awesome, just please invest in better mike or put subtitles, I had a hard time understanding what was being said.

[Hey, are you up?]

You managed to capture the feeling perfectly here.
Takes me back...
The animation is also pretty good and the punchline made me laugh.