lwyzlwyz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[What Albino Skwurl Sees]

This is a nice start. Good art and the animation is mostly solid.
There are some pacing problems with a few scenes lasting too long.
The music is too loud, so that when it´s at a confortable volume I can´t hear the voice work.
Keep up the good work and stay awesome.

GreyBertMonkey responds:

Thanks man, I've got a much better computer and drawing capabilities (I used a mouse to draw this whole cartoon) and my voice acting and music has grown, I hope

[Quoll alone: Where is Skittles]

This is pretty nice.
You should try to balance your sound a bit more. The music kept being louder than the voice acting.
Also, I don't think that fair use extends to using music for dramatic effect or to enhance a scene's atmosphere.

Yokomation responds:

Thanks for the help :3

[Awesome Nesscar - Cyber Invasion (Part 2)]

The art is very good.
The voices are loud(in relation to the rest of the sound) and hard to understand(low quality mikes maybe).
As of now 2.5/5 stars(exactly average).
If you keep working at it you may become one of the greats.

oscaralexismartinez responds:

Actually, you might've put the volume too high while your watching my animation. Don't worry that happened to me once when I was judging a submission & then put a downvote until I saw my volume was too high & accidentally fracture the submission's rating. It's okay you don't have to apologize, accident/mistakes happens. But hey, I appreciate your comment & your opinion, also thank you for judging my art as good & wishing me luck too. :)

[Talk to Me]

It could be a little clearer what the vieharr is doing; I probably wouldn't have understood that without the description in the author comments.
Other than that it's a pretty awesome start to what I hope is a long and fruitful career as an animator.

LaleyWasHere responds:

Yeah, I do realize it can be a bit confusing. That's the one thing that bothered me the most about this film. (that and I feel it was a bit sappy.) But, hey, The best way to learn is to just go for it. lol.

I appreciate the review. Thank you!

[Epic Arena Warriors | 3D Fight Animation]

This is ok for the intended purpose.
The individual character's animations are pretty well done.
I feel that sometimes they're not connecting...
Like they're not actually touching each other with some of the punches and kicks.
Keep up the good work.

Metapixelatron responds:

Maybe I should make the fists and feet "go through" the target. The frame in which the attacks connect with their targets passes too quickly and it might give the impression that there is no connection. Thank you for the insight. I appreciate it.

[Super Stellar Stella (Motion Animation)]

I really liked this.
Stella has a lot of character and the design of the scions is amazing.
I want to see more for sure.
Will you be posting the final version here on NG?

spoonyliger responds:

Thanks, mate!

Yea, I'll be posting it here and everywhere I can. Gotta spread it around like fire!

[The little bastards-the death of leroy]

This was pretty awesome. Well done.
Is it just me or at 1:10 (just before the "I'm telling my mom" caption)
does jimmy mouth "what the ****" ?

studiodenny responds:

Thanks,wait till the next one comes out. yup, he totally does

[Welcoming the noobie!]

The animation could use some work, like some more inbetweens...
The voice work is pretty decent...
The story felt like this isn't the first episode, like I started watching on the second or third part...
Apart from these problems it was an interesting watch and I hope to see more from you.

cuteveemon responds:

Thank you so much for that buuut could you explain what you mean by "inbetweens"? I think I have a clue what you mean buuuut if you could tell me, I'll DEFINTELY know what you're talkin' about.